I don’t miss him,
I miss the person I thought he was.
Everything was so beautiful, but strange.
Somewhere beneath his smile,
And with just a shine in his eyes;
I still remember the unbroken ties.
From his promises and laughters,
To the warmth of his soul;
The depth of his voice and him as a whole!
I guess it was just his existence,
The bond we both shared;
How it all started but distance is what prevailed.
But today, there’s nothing I regret.
I just curse that day when we met.
My heart still asks that one melancholy question;
And I wonder what I dread more,
The echo or the answer!
This is so relatable π
Beautiful lines mate with lot of emotions !!
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Thanks a lot for reading!π
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Pleasure always π π
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Am glad am not the only one who relates ππ ππΆ
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Yessss after all feelings are mutual Joseph π
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It is so relatable…. literally beautiful but strange…kudos to you Maansi
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Glad you liked it!
Thank you so muchπ€
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Sahi jaari hai ladki btw nice poem
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Thanks!
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Loved the last line.
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Thank you!βΊοΈ
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Enchanting, but relatable…
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Glad you liked it!π
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I am getting a little dumb I guess. I didn’t get the last line.
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No it’s not about getting dumb, it’s about different perspective to understand it.π
My view to write it was simple; I can’t understand what do I fear more: is it the reasoning for my questions or is it the echo it will cause in my empty heart!
Also, sorry for late replies. And hope you liked the poem!π
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Got it. Its just the last 2 lines forced me to read it 5 times. Btw, I loved the poem. π
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Thank you!π€
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You are welcome Maansi. π
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Loved it…π
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Nice.
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